Tuesday, 15 September 2015


 we are writing about a character of our choice
I picked GIZMO off gremlins
Emma read my story and she was kind specific and helpful.
Kind:I love the way you told the reader what the movie was about 
That your character was in.
Specific:I think you should think about highlighting the words you
Weren't sure of.
Helpful:have you thought about adding more description about
Your character.

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