Wednesday, 28 October 2015
Tuesday, 22 September 2015
Tuesday, 15 September 2015
we are writing about a character of our choice
I picked GIZMO off gremlins
Emma read my story and she was kind specific and helpful.
Kind:I love the way you told the reader what the movie was about
That your character was in.
Specific:I think you should think about highlighting the words you
Weren't sure of.
Helpful:have you thought about adding more description about
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Friday, 11 September 2015
Friday, 28 August 2015
We have been learning to use descriptive language in our writing so we read this descriptive writing
I will write the first paragraph
Dan the gardener looks like he belongs in his garden.he is about seventy years old and spends all day pottering outside. For the task we had to highlight interesting words
Posted by Unknown at 10:56